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What have you done to me?
A black cloud of pain as our emotions darken.
Once we were togeter in wonder,
Childlike and innocent,
But your heart died.
A deadened vision of memory-
Drops of blood follow pain, follow death,
Love taken away
In a storm of hatered,
I see you.
- by vampire-chick-of-the-dark |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Death Deserved
- Artist: vampire-chick-of-the-dark
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Description:
There is no love
all falls sooner or later - Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: hate love death
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Comments (7 Comments)
- HUMIDIFIER - 07/21/2008
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this is so trite. and hatered sounds like a flavor of haterade, not hatred.
well, you tried, sugar. - Report As Spam
- XxxSkullxCandyxxX - 07/20/2008
- I like it, vivid and clear and yet deadly awesome I give you a thumbs up!
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- 7Haseo - I AM MARCUS - 07/20/2008
- I like it was your good at it keep it up
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- Rosedwanderer - 07/20/2008
- It was powerful and awesome.
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- Cryptnoid - 07/20/2008
- simple clear and great i like it
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- Fofu - 07/20/2008
- cool
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- blaneyi - 07/20/2008
- omg i like this, its soo cool, wow your good!
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