In This the...

• Artist: Hot_Butterfly
• Description: I got this poem published and I thought I should share it.
  Its about the Phantom of the Opera....there is a hidden message if you can find it......(think Edgar Allen Poe style poetry)
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: phantomoftheopera poto phantom lostlove

In This the....

Passion's play and lover soul poured into loving song
Phrase of wit and anger still becomes a painful tune
Stalkers love of hidden hopes
Stand out in joyus throng
Lead to crazed abomination in the courtier's song
Passion's romance put forth on stage
Beauty's magic released in shy determination
And love said no with blut revelation
When all looked upon the scars of hidden pain
Death with Persephone, can happiness abound?
Locked away enduring personal hells
Black ribbon rose marks the grave
Concrete's own angelic face smiling in everlasting love.

answer to the message:
Phantom's Opera

Comments

[Harmonious Dischord]

Beautiful. Deep, yet easy to follow. 5/5

[His butler so skillful]

omg! this poem is AWESOME! love phantom of the opera and i think this is the best i've ever read about it! this explains it so well and its perfect! i would change nothing about it!!
5/5! great job!!

[srs diva 2011 xxl]

Beautiful! crying Your poetry made me cry, and I don't do that often in the case of poetry. crying You're good!

[Firenzied]

5/5 love it! Very original!

[forever7235]

very well written poem. i love the phantom of the opera. and thought you did a ggreat job

[Amra Rose]

its pretty good...i just watched phantom of the opera last night and i love it! but your poem is very good i give 5/5 for originality