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I love you so dearly,
And in constallations I see your face,
Illuminating the sky with your brilliance,
But you have made me feel such disgrace..
The second you said no,
The day you rejected me,
Was when my heart feel into disrepair,
I could look, but I failed to see.
You are my only love,
Thoughts of you are my guilty pleasure.
But you did not return my adoration,
Now I realize that we have no future.
Still I find myself pining for you,
I long to feel your hand in mine.
I whisper your name in my sleep,
As I dream of you time after time.
When laughter kisses your sweet lips,
I cannot help but laugh too.
What is this spell you have cast over me?
Can you not see that I love you?
But you are as elusive as a blue moon,
Although as beautiful as the first snow of winter.
My heart breaks a little each time you ignore me,
I do hope you have found happiness with her.
- by Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: My Beautiful Mistake
- Artist: Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind
- Description: Just something I thought up of last night. I was gonna write it in the old English style, using "thou" and "thy" and whatnot, but I decided not to. Enjoy, and please comment!
- Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: love lost pain
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Lonesome Traveler - 11/16/2009
- love it... it's not like those cliche poems that does not mean anything... i love it's beauty of essence.. it gives out a vibe of what you want to say.. and i'm sorry if this really happened! XD
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- cupcake_ninja08 - 01/18/2009
- I like it, very romantic, but yet sad also!
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- Lamented Sin - 12/17/2008
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Wow this is............ Sad but great......... This is very entrancing.
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