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ill tell you a stroy about a girl
who lived for thirls
she was walking throgh a graveyard
bodies eurapted from the grond
she was lucky i was arond
when i shot to the earth
get those bodies
get those bodies
and throw them down
get those bodies and dance arond
there was blood and guts
allarond
we just couldint help but stare
as we walked arond
solo
a hand birst out of the earth
with a joyes squeal
so full of mirth
get those bodies
get those bodies
and throw them down
get those bodies and dance arond
solo
- by METAL WILL NEVER DIE |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: bodies
- Artist: METAL WILL NEVER DIE
- Description: its just a funny litle number thta me and one of my band mates rote
- Date: 07/18/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- chessiejo - 01/29/2009
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yes it is original
and has a metre
and tries to rhyme
(unlike most of them)
plus it creates a definite atmosphere
so you get 4 stars from me - Report As Spam
- Branduff - 07/18/2008
- It's original at least, sort of. You should really work on your form though, punctuation and spelling is all off.
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