as the dove flies

• Artist: Xxgiggles_luvs_pandasxX
• Description: a haiku i wrote in class for our projects
  and guess what!?!!?!?
  i got an a+ on it!!!
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: haiku dove

a white dove passes
it brings good luck to the world
and brightens my day

i wave as it flies
it does a flip in mid-air
then it flies away

Comments

[michicachan999]

!!!
Wow, this is far more creative than I was expecting it to be. Haikus are sometimes a pain to put together, but you make it seem effortless. 10/10!! smile

[Reakonte of twin blades]

awww, so good. *claps* vote back ^_^

[StarLight_Angel_07]

This was Piece was Beautifully put together..And She's quite the Rhymster. Kudos to you.

[rasengan77]

great! i love haikus!