Blooming Heart

• Artist: Akeioni
• Description: Well. I wrote this poem a couple months ago. Its one of my favorites.
  My inspiration came from life experiences as usual. xD
  I like it because its not too long and it is 'poemish'.
  
  Hope you guys like it.
  
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: blooming heart life pain

I am like a flower,
that nobody sees.
Blooming with passion,
Stinging with please

My life is a storm,
in which I have mastered.
Starts with a raindrop,
ends in disater.

The key to my heart,
on a silver star.
Shot with an arrow,
leaving a scar.

If you ever wish,
to see me again,
Maybe then
You'll see who I am.

Comments

[xXxHimixXx]

very good, i love the last section :
"If you ever wish,
to see me again,
Maybe then
You'll see who I am."
5 stars!!

[Casca 7]

very good biggrin

[Haseo Hyuuga]

I really love your second stanza, "Starts with a raindrop, ends in disaster." that was my favorite part. Your poem seems well thought out and I really like it. Definatly a 4.

[computercat5]

Well done. I think it's one of the best I've seen in the poetry arena.