The ocean

• Artist: takara honoo
• Description: This poem is describing the ocean at night. I wrote it because i love the ocean, and i think the ocean at night is a beautiful site.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: night ocean

The moon is high up in the sky,
Shining brightly down on Earth.
The stars surrounding,
Dancing happily,
With the sound of the night.
The seagulls are flying in the breeze,
Going back and forth with the tide.
The light of the lighthouse,
Revealing danger,
To all who come.
The dolphins are jumping,
Creating a scene,
The Ocean is certainly
A sight to see.

Comments

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

If you split it into stanzas so it's
Four lines
Four lines
Four lines

Two lines

It would be a lot nicer. That's all though, it's fine apart from that.
=)

[Deadcant_Closed]

The ocean is beautiful at night, the swells of wind, and just it's waves are more clear to hear. Nice poem. ^^

[Da Blufox]

Peaceful. I like it.