the reapers noose

• Artist: shadow warrior222
• Description: this was a peom i wrote for school and i could not figure out a topic so i asked my teacher and she said to do it about somthing you love or hate and well i hate war so this is what was handed in
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: reapersnoose shadow poem

Your supposed to be our leader why don’t you understand
So many hate you cause you start the wars but we carry bloodstained hands
During times of war I see you with a uniform but know gun in your hands
Yet your citizens fight in death ridden lands
You stay at home and organize your golf team
And your soldiers sleep to the melody of children’s screams
Come on you need to stop this it was u they chose to elect
Case you are not needed when there is no home to protect
Heed my words if we do not change all hell will break loose
And by the end of the day we will all hang in the reapers noose

Comments

[Aida-la]

so true

[shadow warrior222]

dammit i thought i got all the errors this time damn lying spell check

[Tibix]

well it is true our president is a whore and blood thirsty for power to destroy but the poem would be better it does seem like just a school paper and not somthing more

[HopeforLove]

I really do like it, the first bit was blah, but I enjoy the rhythm of most of it. I can't give you five because of your grammatical (and punctuational) errors, but I really enjoyed it. =)

[LadiieLove.]

I gave you four, due to slight grammatical issues.