Tattoo

• Artist: Arsenic_Ambrosia
• Description: This poem I wrote out of boredom.
  One of my friends had been looking through my book of poems and asked me to write her a poem. So that's what I did. [Then she said it was too dark and asked me to write a funny one. Do you know how hard that is?]
  
  Anyhow, I entered this poem on Poetry.com and my poem was/is to be published in a book called Immortal Verses and I was also invited to Las Vegas for a Poetry convention, which I can't go to.
  
  I hope you guys like this poem!
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: tattoo love abuse

Blood and tears
stain her pale lips.

Forever a mark
of his hate.

The blood is hers.
The tears are his.

Why is it
that fate can be so twisted,

Yet love someone else?

The marks are eternal.
Just another tattoo for another life.

-Shelby
'08

Comments

[weirdfreak1243r]

thats really good. u should write a story off of it

[Dr Eliot_SC]

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[Dreadful Stranger]

wow...very..uhhh...short...keep it up but write more on it...

[bliss-xo]

Lol im sorry to tell you .. but that site is a scam. Everyone who enters gets that. Noticehow every e-mail they send they're trying to get you to buy something. Anyways, its my opinion because of a recent experience with that site.

but.. keep up with the writing smile