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Unbroken
A fortress untouched
No windows for sun
See my shadow
My image
My silhouette
My darkness
I’m hardened
Clogged arteries
Stroke
No blood to the heart
Frozen core
Eyes uncolored
A book closed tight
Nothing presides
No doors, no gates
My skin is dry
Emotionless words
Parched Lips
No Thirst
Pupils coated in skin
Lids shut tight
Emptiness inside
Half empty, half full
Choose the former
A permanent shield
Unquenchable
Cold heat
No energy
Thick drugs
Feelings displaced
There lies no warmth
None I Swear
A rock held tight
Impenetrable
Impervious
Invincible
Nothing to touch
Nothing to see
Nothing within
A dead heart
A false beat
A fake life
Untrue, not right
A labyrinth of lies
You
I’m scared
My worst enemy
A message from God
An angel of mercy
A switch
Lighting the dark
Needing doors not
Even the densest
The strongest of stones
Weaknesses exist
A rushing of river
Water prevails
Erosion wins over
Carves what it wants
Markings run far
Seeping down deep
It cracks running under
A titanic sunk
Wrecked, splintered
A krackenous bite
I lay here drowning
Darkness wants the soul
I’m losing my paddle
I’m losing my grip
I’m losing control
Lost
Flailing no more
Putting up no fight
Defeated, lying dead
I’m broken
A Babylon fallen
My fence is gone
A castle
Taken apart
The moat is dry
The pieces are missing
The foundations lost
Shattered glass
Paper torn
Splintered wood
Scorched, coaled
I can’t see
I can’t think
I can’t feel
I cracked
You broke me
Stolen my soul
Taken my mind
My base, my walls
You thinned blood
Opened veins
The heart, my rock
Knifed it out
You let it bleed
Black blood, a puddle
Drained it
Brightened shadows
Aura of silver
Withdrawal
A fever
Migraines
Fatigue
Stupor aware
I’m tearing
Eyes on fire
Seizing
Convulsing
Can’t take it
It’s Pain
kill it
pray me
please
Taking the parts
The blocks
The head
The eyes
Rebuilding
Replacing
Displacing anew
Tenderizing
Assuring
Warming
Revitalizing
A bringer of life
Finding the spine
Opening the Cover
Reading the pages
Uncovering the ink
Reversing the missing
I’m transparent
I’m clear
I’m open
They exist
My memories
My prayers
My dreams
My feelings
My fear
My sadness
My joy
My life
I can taste
The air, sweet
I can hear
The grass, crisp
I can smell
The aromas, perfumed
I can see
The world, vivid
I can feel
The nerves, electric
I can breathe
The oxygen, cool
My heart, it beats
Tangible
Not fake
Infallibly true
Red blood
Real flesh
Softened
I’m here
I’m alive
Imperfect
Scarred but healed
Fixed though scathed
I’m not complete
Not whole
Something’s not there
I need it
It’s missing
You awakened me
My antidote
My prescription drug
Taught me again
The philosophies
I learned them wrong
The glass is full
Life to the brim
Light can shine in
You extended the glass
A chalice for the lost
Standing adjoined
It laid there in wait
To tell me I lost
My grail
I took a sip
I felt.
I feel. My fear.
I’m callous no more.
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Callous
- by cultofrubik |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Callous
- Artist: cultofrubik
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Description:
It's a pretty long poem about renewal and pain, but there's plenty of heart and soul in it. Please enjoy! And comment if you have anything nice OR mean to say! :D
If it starts to get old, please try to bare with it. At least you can say something not too kind at the end if you don't like it! - Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: pain love regret hope despair
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Comments (1 Comments)
- nyru 007 - 07/15/2008
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i really liike it. you have talent. most of ths time when i see a pome that dosent rhyme i know its just a kid trying to write but cant rhyme to save his life so he just throws phrases together to try to make it work. (it always fails) i loved your poem your style is so different than anything ive ever read. PM me sometime and ill let you read some of my work (im too scared of people stealing it to put it in the arena)
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