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Take me somewhere perfect,
Away from society's sect.
Where you and I can be together,
Beautiful or dreary weather.
The city's so gray,
Life's become pretty bland.
Let's have one perfect day,
In the promise land.
What is a paradise you ask?
A place with no one around,
With not one weighty task,
To just gaze at the stars without any sound.
We've had no time alone,
I'd hate for a fight.
We'd be flawless together,
Holding hands in the night.
If you really do care,
If you really love me.
You would come and we'd stare,
Just us two, you and me.
So come on and we'll go
Just us as two.
Our hearts will flow
As something new.
- by Strokes of Everything |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Let's Get Away to Paradise
- Artist: Strokes of Everything
- Description: A hopeful poem that I wrote about a certain someone... this is my first ever entry so I hope everyone likes it! Comments/suggestions would be wonderful
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: paradise poetry love away
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Wicker Chair - 01/01/2009
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the rhyming is great which is an uncommon thing in modern "poetry"
i would try to make the rhythm fit a little more though
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