Him

• Artist: icygirl357
• Description: This poem is about one of the sweetest guys I've ever met. He started out as a friend but quickly turned into a crush. He has always been a "safe harbor" for me as described in the book New Moon about how Jacob is for Bella (when they were tight friends.) I am not sure if he wants us to be more, but I've seen the subtle hints. This was one of the first poems I have ever wrote (still in my early teens.) Please rate high, give me help on getting better, and add me to your friend list.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: love

heart He talks to me, heart
A twinkle in his eye.
When I meet his gaze,
I feel I can fly.

His eyes can challenge,
Sparkle, and dance.
I loose all reasoning,
Heart begins to prance.

He talks to me,
His voice soothing and strong,
Smooth, rough, and gentle,
I feel I belong.

His voice like familiar music,
Makes me joyous yet calm.
I could listen forever.
In it, my heart’s embalmed.

He talks to me,
And takes my heart away.
He gives me reason
To live another day.

To gather courage,
One day ask to be his.
To one day have him,
heart Him and his sweet kiss. heart

Comments

[penguin_powner]

Thats nice but ima boy.

[Darling-Dani]

Awwww This is Fantastic biggrin this is exactly how i feel about my special someone smile tee hee You did really good !!! hope to see more work from you!!!

[Belladonna Foxglove]

I really liked this. I can feel the emotion behind it. I look forward to seeing more!

[Misfit_Mistress]

SUICIDAL!! xD JK!!
it's pretty good, they rhyming is a bit mediocre.
me likes it.

[curlycute6]

this is amazing annie

[whatplatypus]

aww anneh whut whut gangsta! i didn't know you had feelings! biggrin
jk. you know i love you. it rocks, dude.