The Shoulder

• Artist: Capitan Tyler O
• Description: My Ex Girlfriends Parents split up last year and she came over to my house and cried all night. I wrote this in memory of her around that time. But it's one of my few short poems
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: poetry sweet simple

The Shoulder

It seemed so fast,

It hurt so much.

When you cried I was

a crutch.

But as time passed,

your heart got colder.

And then you had a breakdown,

and for your tears,

I was a shoulder.



(I made that up in like 5 minz so, bear with me)

By: Tyler Orlando

Comments

[Haseo Hyuuga]

Wow, i really like it, you have some talent. Sad story though.

[FireChild21894]

That is touching. ;']

[Teh Juicebox Fairy]

I loved the ending!!!
"and for your tears,
I was a shoulder" LOVE IT!