The Last Night

• Artist: KingBet
• Description: When I wrote this poem I was in a particularly good mood so don't think its something really dark. I intended for this poem to have multiple meanings and interpretations so before you rate it I suggest reading it a second time to make sure you got everything and also try to tie the poem in with the title ;)
  Thanks for reading ^.^
• Date: 06/02/2010
• Tags: last night

The Last Night:

You'll realize how i lived.
What i said,
and what i did.

So let us be alone.
Let us stay awake and chat.
Tell everyone to leave,
and I'll meet you in the back.

Your smile has torn my world apart.
Your grand radiance, it warms my heart.
Demons from our past lay limp,
the way you laugh is proof of this.

So don't worry now while i lay my head upon your lap.
Our time today may be our last.
You rub my hair with gentle ease and care.
I start to dream knowing that I'll see you there...

Comments

[Baizyl]

lol i must comment again...just cuz -^.^-

[Alustrial777]

^_^

[KingBet]

You clearly are a poet then ^^

[Alustrial777]

It sounds to me like the person speaking is dying along with the person they love. As the speaker dies, they are remembering the past and how they came through it together.

Maybe only the speaker is dying, I'm not quite sure. But either way, they find the person they love beautiful and will await them in Heaven when passing comes~

Eh, that's just what I think anyways.

A very romantic poem I must say and it flows well~ (:

[La Belle_ Sara]

i love it ^.^

[Blue Zircon Butterfly]

i'll rate you 4/5

[kellynana]

what the hell dad i thought this was adeath poem it was a love poem0.o
but its ok dad