You Say.....

• Artist: Glowing Paradox
• Description: A sad and lovely poem I made... ^.^ Thanks for reading!
• Date: 07/04/2009
• Tags: love care sadness

I like you,
I called you on the first day and told you I really liked you...
I asked you if you did to,
You asked me many questions to see if he should like me...
It may have been embarrassing, but I didn't care.
The second day, you said it was okay to call sometimes.
The third day, you said you were kind of busy and hanging out with friends...
The fourth day, you didn't answer....
I like you a lot...
I care about you,
A day never goes by that I don't think about you.
You may hang out with friends,
You may not answer the phone,
But we still see each other every week.
You may get into fights, but I don't care.
The thing about you is... you're caring, nice, funny, and cute...
The fact is................



I love you..... I really think I love you.....
Because you told me you liked me...

Comments

[Ahseyo]

Awww.... s**t, this was the best thing I read today. I never think I'd come over writing something this simple and make it look this good. 10/5.

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=102258857#title#title

rate and comment back please?

[Angel of Death_1309]

aww... its so cute, even though its sort of sad. I like it.
Rate Back? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=102125951

[Water Meat Slut]

Aw.. I liked it.

[Pretty Kitty Face]

Awww....... How cute!

[GM-049]

aaww thats sweet!!! smile

[JUiCY_KiKi]

nice impressive =]

[vv7722]

It's all right. I don't like the concept, and it sounds a bit too much like a teenage girl rather than a real poem... but it's well written. The emotions are very strong.