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I fell through the dark
As if i was nothing
Not even a whisper in the air
My voice was blind
What did i do to deserve this
The pain u put me through
I feel so week
How come i was the one
Am i nothing than a un written letter
A note un read
A song un sang
The monster i became
Arent i saposed to be a friend
Who am i
A blank letter
I was write
The monster i have become................
- Title: the monster i became
- Artist: hot club1
- Description: i wrote this when i was down and sad about my life
- Date: 05/27/2009
- Tags: monster became
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Comments (7 Comments)
- vampiric_alchemist #3 - 09/04/2009
- Dude, the poem was so horrible I felt I had to post twice this can't leave the arena, Jesus Christ! 1/5
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- vampiric_alchemist - 09/04/2009
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Horrible, I've seen better from my 6th grade students.
Redundancy FTW? 1/5 sorry, learn to write. - Report As Spam
- yexalen - 09/04/2009
- bad ortography, too bad
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- Twilight Rednaxela - 09/04/2009
- r u serious..........u make me throw up 1/5
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- Pepitokun - 09/04/2009
- u make me die inside...
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- Otipep_2 - 09/04/2009
- wow...my lil brother says better things then this.... 1/5
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- Otipep - 09/04/2009
- very poor.....lack of inspiration 1/5
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