An Undying Promise

• Artist: G O L ii A T H
• Description: Er, something random I thought up. :D
• Date: 04/12/2009
• Tags: undying promise

"Mom, please don't go yet," Timothy said through clenched teeth. "Not now." He squeezed her shirt listening to the beeps of the hospital room. Then, unexpectantly, his mother replied, "Promise me you'll take care of yourself." All Timothy did was squeeze her shirt tighter as the noise of the life support system went straight. She was gone.

Timothy stand there by his mother's hospital bed, mourning her death. It was just him and his mother in the room. The world spinned around them. Tears rolled off Timothy's cheeks. "Promise me you'll take care of yourself," his mother's voice echoed in his head. "I promise," Timothy whispered as he dug his face into her thigh. "I promise."

Comments

[MelroseHime3316]

so sad.....but it was written well, great job.

[md_rocks_29]

wow, its sad but i like it, it happened to me. i got to see my birthmother and birthfather die the same day. but my father died first.

[xx_JustALie_xx]

4/5. Very sad, yet beautiful.

[Retarded Ardvarks]

I love it its sad in the right way too.........5/5

[Crystal Bearer 18]

good wrting

[peachrosey]

That's so sad. But it's beautiful at the same time.

[goodcharlotte007]

very......idk. very nice i believe eh?