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There are alot of daggers in my heart,
but none of them are like yours,
that is buried deep in my heart and mind.
His words are like daggers that are piercing my heart over and over again.
Even though he hates me,
I still love him, and will keep on loving him forever,
knowing that I cannot have him as my own.
- by Jasmine Callisto |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/10/2009 |
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- Title: Daggers In My Heart
- Artist: Jasmine Callisto
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Description:
Sorry. I know that it doesn't rhyme any. It's a free verse poem. Hope you'll like it. ^_^forever,
- Date: 01/10/2009
- Tags: daggers heart
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Violexant - 01/15/2009
- It dosen't have to rhyme, but it need some kind of 'beat'. Or maybe I'm just not used to free verse --- Anyway, it's cool. I'm giving a 4/5 ^^
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- Jasmine Callisto - 01/14/2009
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People won't comment.
Plz comment. - Report As Spam
- Jasmine Callisto - 01/10/2009
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it's forbidden love
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- Jasmine Callisto - 01/10/2009
- XD. oh. thnx. i didn't realize that i did that. ^_^
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- supergirl10895 - 01/10/2009
- well it's a very lovely poem (...is it forbidden love? lol) but you mixed up the place where your text should go and your description of it.
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