love words

• Artist: sweetstrawberryslice
• Description: this is my first words that i write on gaia and this poem is 4 the people who read the poems with thier hearts and not thier minds.i hope u love these simple words.
• Date: 12/25/2008
• Tags: love words

i have some words 4 u
when all the sky is clear and blue
i look at ur eyes i found my soul
and it hurts me so when saying goodbye
i love u.....i love more than any words could tell
or even the greatest writer couldnt fullfil
my love 4 u till the end
u are dearer to me than my life
i couldnt find any other words to say
cuz i really mean what i say
but in the end and after all that
i woke up from my dreams
and found on ur i dont understand where
are u going.but my heart tells me ur leaving
could be true or my nice dream changed
to a nightmare
after all i just want 2 say even if u had gone
i still love u
i still want u
u painted my life with roses
u put the ending words with pain
so i just wanna say we will always love u.

Comments

[Romanchikku na Zetsubou]

It's a bit cliche, and could use some touching up, but otherwise, I think it's really deep.

[AngeI Flonne]

'Tis quite meaningful dear x3

[sweetstrawberryslice]

thx 4 every comment but i want more coments telling more idea about this poem

[dreamerlove8]

that is....deep. i love it.

[Bloody_Buddy_10]

this is perty gooddd!!!