Twisted

• Artist: Iris Blair
• Description: A secret love affair gone horribly array.
• Date: 11/20/2008
• Tags: twisted

My lips will burn against your own,
Twist yourself into me and moan,
To you it’s passion and sweet love,
Of which I know absolutely nothing of,
All I know is the world of use and lust,
Tell me you love me, only if you must,
It feels so incredible, I’ll admit at least,
It’s not me, who can’t resist the feast,
Your flesh rules your trusting heart,
I should be trusted in tearing it apart,
Tangled in the sheets, here we are,
Physically close, emotionally so far.

Comments

[bluemoon122]

wow realy good

[imJerel]

very very cool! how did you get the inspired to write something like this...its so deep, so into it, so powerful! I LOVE IT! 5 stars all the way!

[Overworkedandunderpaid]

Could use some work but very strange. I like it... 3/5

[LovelyDummy]

really nice.
only if i could rite poetry as good as u!!
lol..i give u a 5/5 3nodding

[-cuppycake luff-]

very good. i have been trying to write something to that extent for weeks. but i couldnn't find anything that rhymed with love and lust. silly me.

[iluvpolkadots]

This has some major depth. Good job.

[bipsquamp]

I liked it a lot.
8'D
Pretty.