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Why can't you notice me?
Am I invisible?
Others find me alluring, appealing
But they are not you
They don't have you sense of humor or your looks, much less your personality
There are so much of you that I think I would love
I want you to notice me
To talk to me
I want to understand you and you me
I will never be pretty enough or smart enough or fast enough for you
So I will forget you
You are only a dream from yesterday nothing more
- by strawbarrie |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/19/2008 |
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- Title: a crush nothing more
- Artist: strawbarrie
- Description: You know, that one sided love you went through for that one guy into words.
- Date: 11/19/2008
- Tags: crush
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Comments (7 Comments)
- X-Ulrica-x - 12/02/2008
- i like this <3 i can relate ^.^
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- iBrightScales - 12/02/2008
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How is this in the spotlight?
It's pretty bad.
At least it's poetry, unlike so many things on here.
But honestly, it wasn't worth reading. - Report As Spam
- sanny_manny - 12/02/2008
- i understand how you feel!
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- lonewolf_of_the_woods - 12/02/2008
- Ouch, this reminds me of my crushes, now all the pain is coming back, NOOOOO!!!!
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- PHiLiP33NAY - 12/02/2008
- 5/5. That's all I really have to say. Don't make me cry.
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- doctorziggy - 12/02/2008
- Mediocre and unoriginal.. I'm sure almost every teenager with wordpad has written a version of this.
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- chioryo - 12/02/2008
- wow thats really nice razz ima nerd for poet stuff like that >< i made a poem called amber eyes go check it out sometime >< oh and great job
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