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The swings are left abandoned,
The bed sheets left unclean.
The home is tightly locked,
With no one there to be seen
Just last week I’ve seen you,
Sitting on the doorsteps stairs
Laughing and smiling
Until the day that you’ve left-
You left him crying there-
[x]
I’ll throw red roses at the shadow left behind,
Trying to hide its tears with simple lies
I’ll throw red petals at the shadow to my right,
Wishing one day it would stop-
And just sleep through the night.
As the wind blows the petals away,
There was no reason for you to stay…
It had lost a partner
It once had before
Holding hands- swinging back and fort
Wishing one day that they’ve never fought,
Hopes and promises that he lost
Something he could never gain
No matter what the cost
[x]
[Bridge]
He’ll only say goodbye
When he finds the reason why
You’ve walked out of his life
Cause sadly enough,
He couldn’t keep with his disguise
[x2]
- Title: Red Roses
- Artist: Baysiiks
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Description:
[x] = Chorus
Copyrighted. Please inform me if you wish to use it.
Made last year during AP English.
Enjoy. =] - Date: 11/18/2008
- Tags: roses
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Overworkedandunderpaid - 11/26/2008
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Very good. That's all I'll say and if my sisters or my friends see my rating of four out of five they'll never let me live it down. Oh where has my harsh evil-ness gone!
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- Is it because Im Asian - 11/26/2008
- this is really nice well done smile 5/5
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- Baysiiks - 11/25/2008
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Zalantra, my bestfriend.. xD I will never sing this and you know that.
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- Zalantra - 11/25/2008
- I like it~ I had a little trouble with the, uh, "beat" of the song/poem but the lyrics were very good. Most favorite was the third stanza, least favorite was the second stanza with the repetition of "left" in the last two lines. You should sing this. wink
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- Baysiiks - 11/25/2008
- Voted back Jukelso. =]
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- Deflorescere - 11/25/2008
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This is really pretty but sad too. I really love it ^^-
5/5 Cuz that's all i CAN give. Vote back if you want....but.... - Report As Spam
- OMGcornFEDsun - 11/25/2008
- I like it 100000000/5
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