my savior

• Artist: Luna_luna8
• Description: i love god, so wrote a poem when i first accepted him!
• Date: 09/07/2008
• Tags: savior

when i was young i was scared,
i wasn't sure if he was there.
i go about my ways each day,
i never heard the words he'd say.

the feeling everyone has,
the feeling i long to have.
i wanted him to reach out to me,
i wanted to hear the words he speaks.

i ran inside and cried to him,
dear lord my God, please take me in.
from that day on i felt so free,
to do whatever i may please.

the weight that layed within my heart,
no longer weighs inside me.
i love my God so very much,
he is the meaning of everthing.

thank you God, our lord for each day,
we thank your for our blessings.
so please forgive us for all our sins,
for without you, we are nothing.

-Amen-

Comments

[gabbel]

thats not nice to say to her silentvalentine16!
no ones trashing on what you believe in!
and whos to say all the ppl that believes in christ is all like that.
that just shows ur a racist, a coward, and insecure. to put others ppl down to put urself up. u dont even know who this person is, and to think ya can judge her because of her writting, and what she believes. shows how much of a person you are!

[SilentValentine17]

Congrats on joining the million others who choose faith instead of logic. Hopefully you do not become a bible thumping, religion throat shoving, hypocritical narcissistic drone that many of your people are.

But very well written = )