Love

• Artist: lil4fingers
• Description: I wrote this poem a while back and still feel the meaning is true.
  
  P.S: bequeath means to give or given
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: love advice

There's something people search for,
some look for it forever.
And while some of us my find it,
some of us won't ever.

You know the feeling when you look
deep into their eyes.
No matter how hard you try to tell them
in your many failed tries.

You tried to tell them during class
and tried after school.
But somehow you always ended up
looking like a fool.

So here's advice bequeath to you
people reading this.
"Finding love can be the hardest thing...
but feeling love is bliss."

Never give up.

Comments

[Angel_Death_Dreamer]

I think it is really good. It give advice to the young and old (but not that old) to learn to never give up on love no matter how hard it is to look for it. 5/5

[Rachmaster67]

It was a little choppy, just try to let it flow more.

[sexey tiney]

oh my god! i got such an expresive feeling. as if i was in a trance. that wasnt the best poem that ive ever read but that was the most thoughtful and realy the most expresive (kind of i guess) poem that i have ever read. bravo!! and i hope you put more poems in the arena!

[x___catchingstars]

It wasn't that well written.
But it wasn't horrible.
3.

[Arioko]

Aw, I like that. Its very true :]
5