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Roses Bloom Where Love is Found 01/19/06
By Devin Kruljac Truessence
Rising Sun, morning day,
Troubled hearts in disarray.
Weakened by the days gone past,
Foul fathom, die hard cast.
Let Light shine on quarreled Love,
Disperse the Darkness of thy Dove.
Wings shall flutter under Air,
Waves, like Water, through your hair.
Gentle breeze against your cheek,
Words of whisper on mountain peak.
Distorted Dreams, please come anew,
A deep and loving guidance true.
Beyond the heavens, across the lake,
Glistening Moon hast dost wake.
Shimmering stars reflect your eyes,
A comet’s tear from the skies.
Spirit glide across the Earth,
Making way to its Hearth.
Calm of kiss upon your head,
Reawaken three words have said.
A Crystal Rose shall bloom once more,
Its tranquil petals revise Love’s Lore.
Tree of Heart, its roots grow deep,
The Hole is filled, embraced complete.
Passion of Fire, take up your tears,
Smile of Love, kiss away your fears.
Reaching out within thy hand,
A seed shall grow in times of sand.
Faithful flutter on Prayer’s Wing,
Fallen Angels rise up and sing.
Distance hard and mournful way,
I travel far, for you I stay.
Like the Wind, I come and go,
To the Love I use to know.
Before I burned within my Fire,
My conflict climbing higher, higher.
Then I fall in Water’s Dew,
I drown and see tears of you.
Earth, please bury me underground,
Till Roses bloom where Love is found.
- Title: Roses Bloom...
- Artist: Indicrow
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Description:
I wrote this out of pure inspiration of my life.
It deals with the lost of a Love and the hopes of finding a new. The elements are directly intergrated as melodic messages of the world surrounding me. I've won competitions with this one poem alone and feel it is one of my best poems ever to have so far written. I hope you enjoy it.
P.S. The word "use" has a double meaning if you thought I messed up on the spelling. - Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: love rose spirit wing sing
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Atheshya - 01/07/2009
- Earth and hearth DO rhyme, at least if you're speaking in my accent...
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- NakedJack - 01/05/2009
- Earth and Hearth don't rhyme.
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- Indicrow - 07/16/2008
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Thank you everyone for their comments so far. biggrin
And thank you for the ratings. ^_^ - Report As Spam
- The Mad Hatter Disease - 07/15/2008
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I really love it. It has a lot of rhyme and flow.
You can really picture the romance in the scene with your beloved one. XD
<3
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Very vivid and clear with emotions.
Beautiful.
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- juntomregal55400bjk - 07/15/2008
- hmmm. it really flows. gj. i give ya 5! i like the steady rhythm and how it rhymes but its not like you tried so hard to make it rhyme that it wasnt as natural or meaningful. YAY!
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- Xx_The_Blue_Goddess_xX - 07/15/2008
- hey,cool poem it rox
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- KaTeThEpErSoN - 07/15/2008
- It has a nice flow and lots of emotion. very nice wink
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