The Lonely Tear

• Artist: Ryan Russell
• Description: This is a poem I wrote in November, and I loved the way it played out. I have an older poem, Tombstone, which is scheduled to be published in Immortal Verses sometime in January. Check out my poetry website at: www.phantomseeker.webs.com ^_^
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: lonely tear poem poetry russell

A tear falls gently to the ground
Though quiet, it is the only sound
The world around me bleak and grey
Has neither shade nor light of day
The earth beneath my feet is naught
But what my horrid mind has wrought
And rot it does, but leaves no warmth
Painful nothing it brings forth
I stare at nothing, and nothing calls
Nothing hears, and nothing stalls
Within these walls of my own prison
The only thing I want to do is listen
While I may listen, I cannot hear
Except for the loneliness of that one tear

Comments

[YuMmY_CoOkieXP]

awsome!
ure in prison?

[Ryan Russell]

Thanks! lol. I think you added a few too many tears though! XD

[0-0-0-P-S]

crying i approve of your poetry skills.

[~1lucky1~]

wow thats amazing, good luck on winning! ^-^ 5/5

[addy103]

wow that's very good. keep it up *thumbs up*

[narxfang]

Great Job Bro one of my favorites out of your billionsyou have createdXD

[Ryan Russell]

Thanks! Its kindof a sad poem, but its not like I can make all my poetry giddy and happy! lol. ^_^