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Compliment him,
I'm fond of him,
Yet I'm wrong,
It's more than that.
Never felt this way,
Dreaming of him,
Feels like floating,
What's this feeling?
Is this what they call love?
Heavy humor, Troubled minds,
Tremors roll through the body.
Dare I trespass? Cross the line?
...I shall.
I hold his hand in mine
Life or death,
I'm in love with you:
You're my Heaven.
- by HolyCuppyCakes |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Heaven
- Artist: HolyCuppyCakes
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Description:
A poem I wrote. Does it sound right? >.< Please help. [By the way, Heavy humor means a sad mood.]
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: heaven
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Dead Sound - 11/26/2008
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i give joo a % baybee
lul
i love it..it expresses a lot of emotion - Report As Spam
- Xenexion - 11/26/2008
- aww its cute ^w^ i like it
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