So There's this Boy I like.

• Artist: 1-800-REPTAR
• Description: A poem written in small intervals. This boy in general is somewhat of an imaginary creature that lay inside the speakers mind. Almost as if they're in a dreaming-in-reality sort of state.
  I personally think it's a love it or hate it kind of poem.
  
  ..Either way, tell me what you think. ^^;
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: theres like

So there's this boy I like.


His hair is blue and black
Eyes which never lack
Pigment with pretty green and brown
Such a pretty little thing he is
Oh how he is so kind
It warms my heart to hear him speak
My little toy unwinds.

So there's this boy I like.
Blue locks black locks.
Thick wires line his eyes.
If moon be pale,
He is paler than moonlight.
So there's this boy I like.

His name is Mile.
Millennium with the lipstick lips.
The lipstick lips I love to kiss.
So warm so soft I love my boy.
My boy, my boy, my little boy toy.

Comments

[NebuChi3]

It's so romantic!
......I'm not really good with poetry but I express my feelings by drawing or making my own songs.....^^; I <3 it!

[dreamweaver33]

wow why did it end it i want it to go on. wow

[VK Marshall Lee]

I feel as if the ending should go on, it leaves the reader with a bittersweet ending as to say "what happens next?", or actually more like "i want to read more, this ending leaves me unsatisfied"

it's a poem i suggest you continue.

Much love! :9

[spasticangel]

I really like this poem because its so visual. I can see everything that you wrote! Its so beautiful 5/5 stars

[The elf of night]

Aw, this is sweet; I can just visualize everything. ^^

[Kemmu]

I really like this poem because its a very simple way of telling someone how much they love this other person. * u*
5/5 FOR YOU 8'D