the puppet master

• Artist: pom_pom_destruction
• Description: please write because i want top know who likes it
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: puppet master heart strings

my puppet master makes me lie and desive,
i had tainted a friend to love this pet peeve,
he takes me to stroll with my strings all are broken ,
i sit quite and wait as no words have been spoken ,
as i am a puppet, my master hates me,
yet he keeps me boxed up as my heart as the key

Comments

[flyys]

hard to understand... it's like im supposed to consider what you say is true without any definitions... I dislike short poetry that has too many topics that broadens out. Poetry should not have many riddles that is answered without reason. I kind of feel like saying "whatever" to this work...

[xXDmoRainbowsXx]

very good indeed

[Amu_chan_404]

this is awsume zoe!!!

[close_enough453]

WOW! That is one of the best ones I have heard all day! If I could I would give it a 10/5 ! Keep up the good work!

[Dreadful Stranger]

deep...i like it razz keep it up

[Nikki4815]

I like it. Normally I hate the short poems, but this is good. 5/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"

[alysa4132]

i'm depressed...i love it...