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Darkness set in,
as the rain poured down.
Relentlessy at times,
on the small little town.
I stared out my window,
and watched it fall.
Enjoying the gloom,
the darkness of it all.
A thunderous roar
was heard overhead.
The kind of roar makes children
dive under their bed.
It barely startled me.
I was numb inside.
It was as if as I sat there,
a part of me died.
I tilted my head and
pondered this a bit.
Once so alive... and now...
living in a emotionless pit.
"Is this how it ends?"
I thought out loud.
No answer came back,
except thunder from a cloud.
"Or it could be just the beginning"
said I, as i bit my lip.
"Should I stick around longer?
Or abandon the ship?"
Watching the rain.
I asked myself these things.
Can happiness come again?
Or is pain an eternal ring?
- Title: Circle of Darkness and Doubt
- Artist: Rhukya
- Description: just a poem :)
- Date: 11/04/2008
- Tags: circle darkness doubt
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Comments (7 Comments)
- tiyara11 - 12/20/2008
- This is beautyful i'm going to copy it
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- jessicabuckner - 11/12/2008
- good job that was a great friggin poem i wish i could make one as good as you :]
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- A Pickle Surprise - 11/04/2008
- awesome poem! 5/5
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- Ginjar420 - 11/04/2008
- very good poem, i wish i could rhyme as well as you, yet i'm stuck on free verse
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- pixiz(-_-)rock - 11/04/2008
- i feel your emotion...it is a beautiful thing..
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- mikeyman21 - 11/04/2008
- i like the poem baby.
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- MeltingMilkBottle - 11/04/2008
- well versed!
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