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part 1
theres an unknown angel out there
she once had a group of friends but then in a few days when she was gone they didnt know who she was
she felt heart broken and unloved
she cried herself to sleep and dreamed only nightmares
only a few would answer her calls and those were her true friends that kept her smiling everyday and made her nightmares turn into a dream of happiness
she doesnt forgive but only forgets
her pain lives in her but she blocks it out
rainclouds turn to sunshine and the grass became greener
not another person could strike her spirit down
part 2
the days came by
her happiness lasted forever
no pain came through her
everytime she had problem her friends were there for her
her heart was pumping and was filled full of love
everyday her hopes rised like tides on a shore
but suddetly she realized something
that she didnt only need friends but she also needed self confidence
part 3
this time its bad
the angel has messed up her hope and love
her friends leave her and shes left in the dark
her halo turns into horns and her wings fall
she cries every night instead of praying
her dreams come back to nightmares
and the sun stops shining
the ocean stops flowing
the plants die
and noone bothers to look at her
a thunder storm stays over her head
days go by and shes still in the dark
she doesnt bother to talk anymore or move much
she tries to kill herself but she remembers shes already dead
which made the days more depressing
she doesnt think she has a chance for another friendship
an old friend of her's said to her
"dont get close to friends because they will move away before you know it"
part 4
she meets her old friends
they discuss their old friendship
as the days go by they get closer and closer and become friends once again
the sky once again returns to normal
and she feels alive again
but after the days they dscussed and then argued they couldn't control their anger at each other anymore so they went at it
they fought mentally and physically
they couldn't stop
and the heart was hurting mroe than the hits
then god came
and had to punish them
but the unknown angel was sorry for doing her deed
so she said the whole thing was her fault and her friend had to protect herself
so god had banished the angel from the heavens and was sent to hell
she was furious but didnt regret her lie
she cared inside and that was it
she knew she couldnt hold a grudge but do the right thing instead
part 5
she went to hell and she was the only light there
but she only had a little lgiht left
she felt scared and cold in the dark
tears ran down her cheek as she looks up at the sky for her final goodbye to heaven
- by My Bloody Wishlist |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/11/2008 |
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- Title: Unknown angel
- Artist: My Bloody Wishlist
- Description: a story about an angel that has problems with her friends and can't sem to keep them
- Date: 10/11/2008
- Tags: unknown angel
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xX I ARE GUMMY BEAR xX - 12/06/2008
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woah you have to keep going this is awesome!!!!! that guy is right everyone has their own opinion and i think that u should def continue this is awesome!!! 20/5 if i could hehe sweatdrop but i could only give up
to 5 so 5/5 lol continue plz - Report As Spam
- YoungGirl88 - 10/15/2008
- i guess you deserve somthing so ill give you a 10/10
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- My Bloody Wishlist - 10/14/2008
- i will write more it will come out about next week cuz i have school and i gotta think of it
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- cutiepie0422 - 10/11/2008
- that was magnificant. i love it you must write more
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- x-B l u B e r r ii-x - 10/11/2008
- wow that was soo beautiful yes write more or i shall die if i do not read any more of that wonderful and beautiful poem
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