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I sat on a window sill of an abandoned building, brushing my hair out of my face. I was looking at the sun setting behind the buildings of Manhatten. It was so peaceful. Suddenly, I was wrong.
I saw a speck in the sky, miles away. It may have been just a plane, but I was always careful. Suddenly, I heard noice from behind me. I turned, and they were there. They were Blinkers. The Blinkers are creatures created by scientists to catch things that they wanted. Devolved things. Things like me. I am devolved, and I will explain in a minute.
I looked over my shoulder at them and smiled. I looked in front of me again and put my hands on the back of my head. Just then, I leapt from the window into the red and pink sky. I started going down. I straightened myself and snapped open my wings. I caught an air current and was pulled up. I headed towards the sun, flying high above Manhatten. It was wonderful to fly again...
You see, I am a child that was born with wings. They wanted me for experiments. "They" are scientists craving for my blood so they can change it and duplicate it. I have no idea why. My parents were killed while they searched for me, but I survived. I escaped and hid. Now, they have come for me.
My name is Christina, and this is my story.
- by blehIfailsobad |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/07/2009 |
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- Title: Wings
- Artist: blehIfailsobad
- Description: I tried. It's hard to write a story off the top of your head, but this one was well planned out. Please tell me what you think!
- Date: 04/07/2009
- Tags: wings
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Comments (7 Comments)
- blehIfailsobad - 04/12/2009
- Thanks. How do I do a second chapter...?
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- dracostarx3 - 04/11/2009
- not bad start but keep going 4/5
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- Kahahana - 04/09/2009
- An okay start, but this doesn't belong in non fiction.
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- blehIfailsobad - 04/09/2009
- I was going to do one about vampires, but I decided to do one like this because I adore angels. I haven't read Maximum Ride, so I will see to it that I will. I'm going to write the vampire one too.
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- pokergirl21 - 04/08/2009
- its a good start you should read the series Maximum Ride its basically like your story
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- Ravenhare - 04/08/2009
- I think it was a very good short story. And not everything has to b true!
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- virtualheroix - 04/07/2009
- Is this even true? I mean come on. People with wings...
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