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Once there was a girl named Jenira an Alifectian and her planet was a very long distance away from earth.Jenira's parents didn't like beacause they like her sister Layla which Jenira called her perfect sister.Jenira wanted to find out of something no one else had ever found in there planet called Alifect.Jenira's parents had always told everyone that she had only one child but she had 2.Jenira always wanted other parents but she couldn't because her parent wanted her to suffer and suffer.
Alifectians had travled in a letions like a space shuttle.Jenira wanted to get in one so she thought of a plan.Her plan was to run into one by herself but a few days later she found someone to do it with it was a girl named Genavive she wanted to do it to.On the day they were going was the 6Th moon 1Tak which on earth is June 1th they thought it along time till the day came to go as she went on the yath(sidewalk) with her bestest friend Genavive for 1Tak by themself.
When they got there they ran into the building and got into a Jebt suit (Space Suit).They had to waited till the door opened as they saw the famous Amous Letual and Letbatath Latauity were puting on their Jebt Suits.The door opened.They ran in as they ran in they thoght of a place to hide so Amous Letual the boy Letionener and Letbatath Latauity the girl Letionener wouldn't see them.They thought and thought and thought til Jenira said''Look i found one!''. Genavive said''thats good''. As they looked at the 2 pots.And they hide in them for an hour talking.
Then finally, Amous Letual and Letbatath Latauity came into the letion and they said''Are you ready?''.And they said''Yeah duh!We're ready!''.They were ready for take off as they took of the pots begain to shake and one by one they broke.First Genavive then Jenira.The letioneners turned around looked at them in a weird way and in a very bad mood!
To be continued................... cry
- Title: Alifect
- Artist: Jazziya
- Description: U'll love it!!!Its 1 Page of fun!
- Date: 02/06/2009
- Tags: alifect
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Comments (1 Comments)
- SevesDariku - 04/11/2009
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Hard to read...
Grammar could use some work, also avoid using new words without a good way to introduce it (a way that doesn't use parenthesis like this)
Also, this should be in the Fiction section - Report As Spam