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As the lights deem out all I see is black just like the night
sky scaring me and it makes me cry how do I escape this black hole that I seem to stand in fear and dreaded place I cant be here. I'll I have ever seen was light even in the darkest of days but know every thing seems lost I cant see anything its lost, and so am I.
Were shale I go. Over and over I again I pas back and forth so I think this place of nightmares could be No were and every were at the same time it could be moving but do I belong her?? Is this the end?? Is this the place that ever one said was full of evil? Is this hell???
TO BE CONTINUED
- by Larka-love |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/13/2009 |
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- Title: Lost
- Artist: Larka-love
- Description: This is a poem story so ya
- Date: 01/13/2009
- Tags: lost
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Comments (2 Comments)
- dodo xXxvampirexXx - 02/17/2010
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woooooooooooooooooow!!
I realy realy loved it
keep it up - Report As Spam
- Rian_Lena - 06/12/2009
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If this is a poem then it should go in 'Poetry/Lyrics' but if it's a story then it goes in 'Fiction'
And the structure is a bit odd, but the concept is very nice. Just be careful on spelling and grammar. - Report As Spam
