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when i was younger i had a friend ,a friend named bear ,a dog
he was my best friend sence day one
he would le meh pull his hair ears bite him anything because he new it was a sene of love
i used to think i was born for him and he was born for meh
we were like cake with the frosting
danm i loved him i loved him with all my mite
then i guess it was his time so heres wat happend
there was a great forest fire (the big elk meadow fire)
in colorado it was across the street from me
danm i hated it
we almost had to abanden are house
and there was so much smoke u could not breath
and of course dogs got to do there busnes rite?
well ya so i went out side with my dog
and he stode at the fence watching the flames across the stret just stood there lifelessly for about five mins
and then he started to bark a very high pitched bark omost lik a fire sirin wahmbulance
and i could tell rite that moment somthing was wroung his bark wint higher and highe and i went in to my own littel world and had all these flash backs of meh playing with him sleeping with him
just anything i did with him almost like a camra recording all the littel senes detals
then out of now where i realized my dog had stoped barking and was weezing i could almost here in that weez "krystal i love you its my time to go"
and he droped to the ground i burst into tears nowing wat happend i ran up to him got on my nees and started holding his lifeless body hoping praying a mirical would haapen i sat there holding him wat seemed lik forever but was only a coupel ove mins and i did not no wat to do.
i just started screaming my parents name barly over 2 flooded out by my tears "grandma!! papa!! mommy!"
i thought i was dreaming hopeing i was
then my parent came out there with meh saw meh on the grond crying holding him.
they new wat had happend they could tell i was heart broken.
but bears in a better place now
i know he is
"a dog with a shadow of an angel"
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- by - iQuit l3itch |
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- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: a dog with a shadow a angel
- Artist: - iQuit l3itch
- Description: this is a story of win i was younger and my only friend was a dog that *god* ,god just had to take
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: alldogsgotoheaven
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Aunty Tesha - 03/18/2009
- I see drawings with wings everyday...doesn't mean that it's of God or that the artist believes in God. Haven't you seen the Devil with wings? In all reality, the Devil was an angel at first. Then he wanted God's power, so God banned him from Heaven and gave him his own hell...where he can be be worshipped like a god. But there is only one...God. P.S. There's no dog drawing.
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- Aunty Tesha - 03/18/2009
- I started feeling sorry 4 your loss, BUT HOW CAN YOU NOT BELIEVE IN GOD??? You can't blame him for your problems, you should thank him for letting Bear come into your life and make it joyous. Everyone and everything will live and die, but God is the creator of all. Without him, you, your family, and Bear wouldn't have existed. God has a plan for all living creatures and what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger. God never puts us through aything we can't handle.
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- - iQuit l3itch - 12/19/2008
- ok first off im not saying i dont belive in god...this hole story is about me losing my best friend at a younge age and i believ he was a dog but deep inside him he was a gardian angel.....ok?......i am a christan i go to church...I BELIVE IN GOD!!!!!...ok???........thats y i drew a picture of a dog with wings!!
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- CazzyxBear - 12/14/2008
- You dont believe in God... because your dog died.... wow... : / not trying to be mean or anything, i would be extreamly upset if something happened to my kitties, but.... to stop believing in God for something like that is rather childish. Like I said, i dont mean to be rude :3
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- XxXibladeXxX - 11/30/2008
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wow!
dis also happened to me
similar atcually
my house once got on fire and we had to evacuate in the middle of the night
i was 3 and i had a dog named blue
i named him blue for his eyes!
i was so scared and ran out the house but we all forgot Blue and the fire department was too late
we lost Blue forever - Report As Spam
- goodgurl32 - 11/29/2008
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that is beautiful and sad. . .
R.I.P. BEAR - Report As Spam