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We lived in a generallly small village, surrounded by nothing but thick bush and tree's. I have never been past the bush's, never had the gut's to move forward and feed my curiosity,
until that one day that changed everything,
I't was a normal day (well as normal as i't get's) in the village and I heard a noise in the bush's, I walked toward's them and i't get's lowder and then I hear a really loud disturbing noise. I moved the bush out of the way and I find a big slimy rattle snake crushing it's large venomous teeth into a rat (or mouse), I had no idea what to do because I have never been in this situation, so I just walked away and left it be, he's got to eat right?... right?
Anyway I was walking around the border of the tree line and kept looking into the tree's. <it was all dark and gloomy, moss hanging from the tree branch's like blanket's on a clothes' line> curious me decided to walk into the tree's and see how far I could go before I couldn't see the village anymore <and remember I have never been past the tree line before> i walked a few yard's and it just kept getting darker and darker, which was to be expected, obviously.
~ a few hours later... ~
...So lost. Right look's like left, and left look's like right, I had no idea which way to go, they all looked the same, up was down and down was up <not literally> but everyway I looked I couldn't make up my mind so I just kept walking straight for hour's and hour's so my leg's got so tired and so did I. I could feel it was almost dinner time, because my stomache was starting to grumble and make echoing sounds... wherever I was. It started to get really dark and I was stumbling on branch's and rock's. I stopped for a bit to take a rest and I heard a soft noise in the distance and i looked the way the sound was coming from and i saw flickers of light shining through the tree's, my stomache stopped grumbling and i got butterflies, i was running towards the light as fast as i possibly could without tripping on fallen branch's <impossible btw.. dont try it.> and as soon as i reached the tree line, i heard men clinking their beer glasses together and singing around a big bonfire, i didnt know where i was, i didnt know where to go (should i go or should i go and ask for directions to my village <psshh ya right> wink i turned around and was about to leave and i heard behind me and very scruffy raspy man voice say "Hey you!!"
i turned around and just looked at all the men looking at me. i was officially scared. "Its a WOMAN men. Get her!" the raspy voiced man said. a large group of men were running straight for me, all i could do is start running my hardest back where i came from. (but i have been walking all day and my body was giving up) i tripped over a huge stump and scraped my knee horribly, but that was the LEAST of my worries!
Three men picked me up, one and my feet and two at my arms. They carried me back to their village and they layed me on a bed and they start patchin up my cut on my leg, i started to think maybe they just wanted to help me <...or eat me. (i was still scared !)> they gave me a drink of pure whiskey and it burned going down my throat, over and over again. <i fell asleep>
~ a day later ~
i woke up around mid-morning expecting to wake up in my bed but i found myself in someone else's bed... a mans, he was snoring like an elephant and i didnt know what do to <what happened while i was sleeping... ooh i dont feel so good. my stomache hurts, ohhh god!> so many things were going on in my head, i was so confused... <WHY AM I IN BED WITH A MAN!!> i tried to leave but my hands were tied to the bed ends and i was getting freaked out so i took my feet and pushed the covers down and saw i had no clothes on and i woke up the man next to me and he rolled over and he was naked as well and it was the raspy voiced man and he said "Good mornin' sweety"
- by Lt. Maguechi |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/24/2008 |
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- Title: Never leave home.
- Artist: Lt. Maguechi
- Description: NEVER EVER WANDER TO PLACES U DONT KNOW! lol. this is not a real story obvious, not many small villages around north america or where ever anymore lol. but still it scary stuff.
- Date: 07/24/2008
- Tags: leave home raped
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Comments (5 Comments)
- IRKookies - 01/13/2009
- freakishly awsomly weird but good
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- Scarletgreen - 12/13/2008
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'We lived in a generallly small village, surrounded by nothing but thick bush and tree's. I have never been past the bush's, never had the gut's to move forward and feed my curiosity,
until that one day that changed everything,' that happens to be the best part of literature in this whole thing. But uh...did you feel the necessity to make the girl be 'raped'? o.o - Report As Spam
- angstar54 - 08/03/2008
- Wowza. Nope, never wandering off alone again.
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- Lt. Maguechi - 07/25/2008
- lol thanks xD
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- likeicare11 - 07/25/2008
- creeepyyyyy!!!!! but very good ^^
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