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Most people think I'm just an ordinary teenage girl, obsessed with make-up, all I talk about is boys. But, maybe those sort of things just take my mind off my real problems. I keep them bottled up inside where no one can see the real me and my real feelings.
I don't think anyone knows who Caitlin really is, not even me. She's just a girl who hides inside of me, wishing she could come out but knowing se can't. No one understands her.
Some of the things racing through her mind hurt too much to be spoken aloud. Most people would think that those things are silly but she knows they're not, they couldn't be more real to her or the body in which she is trapped.
She's waiting for her time of glory when she can break down the barricades to reveal her true self for the audience behind the curtains, behind the tears.
Am I Caitlin or am I turning into the useless body which incases her, leaving her to fade away into the past? If so, what is the meaning of my life?
I'm just another cage, another prison wandering the earth, searching for the real me.
- by Caitlin-chu |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/05/2008 |
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- Title: The Girl Inside Me
- Artist: Caitlin-chu
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Description:
An extract from my diary.
I know it all sounds very melodramatic but that's what I was going for. - Date: 11/05/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Caitlin-chu - 11/21/2008
- Thanks for the comments! smile
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- Fleshy Flower - 11/20/2008
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Melodramatic diary entries arent that interesting. Its stale, no one knows who they really are until theyve lived. How you act in reaction to things that happen thats who you are.
Your writing style seems like it could be put to better use. Find something in your life that is uncommon and write about it if you want to stick with non-fiction. You have potential but its wasted writing this hackneyed kind of stuff. - Report As Spam
- BlissChoco - 11/16/2008
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Sounds great.
Even though short, it's was sweet.
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- Lightblue1208 - 11/16/2008
- thats interesting. -lightblue1208
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