devil teacher

• Artist: XxXangel of painXxX
• Description: wierd
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: devilish

One day I found out that my teacher was the devil so as a punishment he would eat
A soul He would get a wee bit stronger everytime but he hate lots of thing but what
He hates the most is mornings so a kid tried to cheer the teacher up the kid got an
Enterneity of work sheets evil But on kids son was a priest the priest came down and
Sent him back to hell twisted Now are teacher is a vampire burning_eyes

Comments

[my familey]

WTF?! Not non-fiction.

[Strawberri Puncher]

I like it but I agree with the others. Sorry. Nice story, Bad spelling and grammar.

^_^

[A Souless Girl]

Dude, you really need to learn how to spell.

[LeHayden]

If you read a book, do you really think you'd see little smilies and emote-icons in there?

[zox-emo-roxas-xoz]

Horrible writing, the grammar and spelling made me want to puke. No storyline at all, and didn't you know to qualify for a short story, your story must be at least three hundred words? That's worldwide, buddy.

[mizuhino]

Your spelling and punctuation (or lack thereof) was so bad that it made me lost. Work on the technical stuff. 1/5 :/

[RainbowStylez]

nice reference image, lmao ^^'