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Scared
By Alex Lundquist
1 intro
2 the new life
3 my life
4 blood lust
5 the twist
6 the hope
7 the hunt
Chapter 1
Intro
I never thought about how I was going to die until today I heard my friends saying Emily wake up wake up. All I could fell was the pain when I got turned in to a vampire my head was hurting so bad and I-I was gone no one could get me up I was scared and I could not hear anything but I was floating in the air and then I faded and here is my story ten months ago.
Chapter 2
The new life
This is the second month that I was a vampire and my best friend that called me a freak when I told her that I was a vampire and she was not too happy but that like the first day now two months have passed and she wants to become a freak like me. “I said you do not want to be like me it is so not good you never know who you are going to kill and you never know when.”
“She said she does not care at all.”
I said “ok but on Friday and that is two days from now. “Next thing I know its Friday no time to think about what I am going to say to her at all so I guess I am going to bit her.
She was at my door and she said I am ready so I took her to my bed room and then she got bit and I cried when I bit her and then she passed out.
Chapter 3
My life
I got turned in to a vampire ten months ago and counting how I got turned in to a vampire is by one of these scared one that is what they call them self I call was for wondered why they called them self’s that and I still have not found out why they call them self’s that. Well back to the story and here is what they said you well have to go thought this eternal life and then I fainted and I could hear nothing else and now I still go to school but it’s at the same school but at nights.
Chapter 4
Blood lust
after a month of the scared ones bit I went to the school at night and there they were the ones that bit me I ran to the one that bit me and slapped him and then he took me to the ground and I now do not hit the scared ones after that thing well I went to class and I found out that I am going through a stage called blood lust it is a stage that you desire blood. and so I asked my new best friend called Alexis and she is so nice and that she is one of the odder ones and she know more about this then I do and she is tell me stuff that I going to go though and I asked her do I have to wear all black like you and the others and she said yes it’s a dress code for the school and that it’s kind of nice too wear a color that you do not like because after you wear it. it get to be a habit after you wear it once or twice and it is cool to wear ok whatever but what if I don’t have any black clothes at all then you go to the office ok thank you Alexis. Your welcome Emily.
Chapter 5
The twist
after I got some clothes I had this thought what if I made someone get mad I thought that would be funny and that no one eels would do it because they are too afraid and now I am going to show them that I am not afraid like they think I am well here comes a new Emily that they were not expecting.
here is the day that I make someone mad and it was not the beat idle and then well I am going to tell you what happened to me after I did that I got taken to the ground again it sucked very bad.
Chapter 6
The hope
I had a problem I meant this guy called Phillip and he hates me and I have no clue why and I asked him why and he said you tell me why in a rude way so I hope he well get a attitude check next time I see him. The next day I saw him and he still does not have a good attitude. And in class to day I learned about this thing called the hunt and we go on a hunt at school and we go and feed on human blood so here we go this well be my second blood feed because of the first one that I had was with melody my best friend. And it is tomorrow.
Chapter 7
The hunt
Well like I said today its tomorrow and its one of those things that you can’t say no to because you have to or you die!!! So I went to sleep and then I woke up and then and then well I forgot so let’s skip to the part about the hunt I went on the hunt with Alexis and melody and Phillip because he is much better now I bit a werewolf by accident and it did not go well and this what happened. I never thought about how I was going to die until today I heard my friends saying Emily wake up wake up. All I could fell was the pain when I got turned in to a vampire my head was hurting so bad and I-I was gone no one could get me up I was scared and I could not hear anything but I was floating in the air. The end to part one
- Title: became
- Artist: draco9696
- Description: it is kinda like the other story i wrote
- Date: 10/16/2011
- Tags: became
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Comments (1 Comments)
- asiancomplex - 10/21/2011
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....try spell check. And grammar check. Seriously. It gave me a headache just reading it.
Seems like one of those cliche vampire stories everyone writes. Add some creativity to it, or else it's boring... - Report As Spam