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It was the night before halloween. A joung, just married couple was going to there parents. the women names Mary says:"Its become late darling, maybe we must spend the night in a hotel." The man names John say:"Okay sweetheart, i... hey?!... what the hell?!" there car was out of gas, mary say:"Its okay darling, maybe we can walk to a hotel." So, they walk and walk and walk when they finally found a hotel with the name " the hotel" it was very old , but they saw light in the hotel so they go inside. The hall was old, they go to the desk and they click on the little bell on it: "ting ting" a long,thin man with a white skin and a bump on his back like quasimodo from the Hunchback of notredame. The man says:"Good night sir and miss, how can i help you?" Mary say:" Good night ,can we take a room for tonight please?" the man say:" of course, here is the key of room 2233 have a good night!" john say :"u to sir" and they go to there room, the man grinned and whispered:" we will see..." Mary and john are in there room john say:" i go take a crap il be right back" and he gave a kiss on her forehead. Jonh was just away or Mary heard a sound of a motor ,she looks at the window and saw mans with white masks and knifes and chainsaws and they are going into the hotel! Mary was frozen with fear. John cames out to the bathroom and ask :" Whats the matter sweetie, have you see a ghost or something?" Mary takes his hand and crawled with him in the closet. John says:"Maybe its a weird question but, why are we in a closet?" the strange man with masks cames in the room. Mary wanna scream but John put his hand on her mouth and say: " Here is a secret door you go first and then we going to a police office, okay?"Mary nod and she go in the secret door.she run so fast if she can she stopped, turns around and say:"John?" on that moment she heard John screaming "NO!...MARY!.....RUN FOR YOUR LIFE AAAAAAAH! NOOOOOOO! she heard the noise of a chainsaw and a creepy laugh....a tear rolled down her cheek .She run so hard she can untill she saw a light on the end she open the door on the end. it was the door of a little chapel next to a police office she run to the police office and told her story. the police man ask:"Whats the name of the hotel again?" Mary say:" the hotel sir" her knees nodded from the fear and fatigue. the policeman say:" But miss there is no old hotel in the woods with a name the hotel." mary says:" but...but..i was there and my husband is there!" the policeman say:"Miss there is no hotel!"
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Nobody believes Mary ,she was going away to find John ...though it was her own dead
- by Xx Ohh-Matt xX |
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- | Submitted on 10/08/2011 |
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- Title: the hotel...
- Artist: Xx Ohh-Matt xX
- Description: a women and her husband go the night before halloween to there parents, its became late and they spend the night in a hotel they have never seen before,they better shouldent do that....
- Date: 10/08/2011
- Tags: thehotel scary horror fiction mary
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