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The Gibson's had just moved in the biggest home in the whole town.They called the house,Riverview.It was called that because there was a beautiful view of the Knowle river all the time in summer,winter and fall,even though leaves always fell."We're here"Pa called to the kids and Fiona,his vain wife."This house better be better than the old on or else."Fiona said in her british accent."Ehhh Eeehhh!"They're baby screamed,she seemed to be frightned of the house.Pa opened the door and heard a loud creak and saw a shadow going up stairs."Umm,that was sort of disturbing---Itr was probally just that big chandilier shaking from all the wind."It better of been.I am seeing that chandlier more wealthy than you!"Fiona yelled at Pa.(Dad's name is Pa.)"Whatever,enjoy the house."Pa said very anoyed.They took the two children upstairs."Let's play with the teddy first.I like it." Georgia they're daughter had said.Then exactly 43 seconds later they saw a very tall shadow,which was actually just Pa's shadow."Don't come in Mama's and Pa's room"Pa said .Fiona wanted to be sexual with Pa.Soon they started to groan and moan."That sucked"Fiona said."You wanted it!"Pa screeched at her annoyed once again.They had some very,very sexual times.Fiona looked in the closet and saw a red-print on the wall kind of whitened out llike someone wouldn't notice it said: Dead is to come.Fiona was very furious and broke open the wall a little bit,she saw a little piece of the wallaper on the floor.She saw a very dark red color behind the wallaper and saw tally marks as if someone had been in the room for very many days.She counted "1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20" Exactly 20 tally marks she counted.
Fiona seemed frightened,she actually felt a push and fell on her bed.She stayed quiet.Soon she her a voice in her her to grab a knife and murder her family.She didn't know what to do so she went to her purse and grabbed her pocket-knife she kept in her pouch.Fiona walked to the bathroom where her husband was showering and stabbed her husband 3 times in the head and once in the chest.She was sure he died,Then she waited and didn't kill her children.Pa hadn't died just yet though.
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- viiator - 04/23/2011
- some spelling errors but the story itself is nothing to sneer at. ^.^
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