Nice Woman

• Artist: xD_Sweet_Angel_Dx
• Description: Its a memory about the nice woman ho helped me in the super market :)
• Date: 12/11/2010
• Tags: nice woman

One´s i went to the supermaket and i needed to go shopping for 1 week (for home) I just got all in my basket and put it one the cash desk and then i wrote 100$ and i just looked like this o.o because i just got 50$ and i just was thinking then there where that woman and she gave me 50$ that i can pay everything i just said " OMG!! Thank you! and i just got to the exit and i saw the woman and said I´ll give you the money back but she just said you don´t have too *smiles* then she just went away i were really happy!! (ill never forget this!!)

Comments

[Puternic02]

First of all, it seems you're in the wrong section of the writing arena. Also this has a few errors that make it confusing. Third of all, there are quite a few run-on sentences. if you fix the confusing errors and diffuse some sentences, this will be eligible for a 5. for now, I give this a 3.

[Leafofthecats]

I.... don't understand this..