dancing flame

• Artist: devil-rath the third
• Description:
• Date: 12/03/2010
• Tags: dancing flame death demise darkness

the flame dances in my hand as i focus on the chi that forever controlls me.
the so called sociaty has made me an out cast that has been doomed to forever to wonder the dark border lands.

while i wonder aimlessley into the darken abyss of my destruction and demise.I fallow the worn down path to the exit of this forsaken land that has been cursed in sand and doughted niles.

my life begins to slip slowley between my fingers... my vision blurs... all i have the strengh to right.... is.... is.... is my sarrow will fallow me to the very deps of hell for which my power came from.

Comments

[Darklings_Angel]

this story seems really dark and emotional which *in my opinion* is very awesome and cool...just work a bit on the grammar and it'd be perfect!