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“Maybe somewhere along this path we took;
Lies a crossroad that I may have overlooked;
It may have helped me, it may have not;
But bound to you I’ll take whatever I’ve got…
No man gets left behind, you told ne then;
I believed it and held you for so long as I can;
Then when I fell weary and soon gave way;
You held me ten to rekindle the day…
I lied to you once yet you trusted me still;
I lied once again but strong is your will;
You knew what I did yet you kept on that smile;
Now that I’ve grown you retain this flight from denial…
I’ve already said sorry yet you denied it swift;
Saying that there wasn’t a thing for you to forgive;
I wondered then if I was wrong to tear up your eyes;
And yes, I was wrong, wrong of my lies…”
- by Prince_Sauki-17 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/23/2010 |
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- Title: Mistake to my Angel
- Artist: Prince_Sauki-17
- Description: I made this as a thanks and as an apology for a person I considered my sister, but in end I considered something even further. It was just a tragedy soon after to realize certain feelings failed to be mutual. So now, yeah, Im pretty much taking it all out on myself and on this social network. I hope people take time to comment, because I'll appreciate feedback even more than ratings... ^_^
- Date: 10/23/2010
- Tags: mistake angel love pain emotions
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Hammerhead Shark - 01/10/2011
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wow...
you should write more
you also shouldn't take it out on yourself
i hope you feel better smile
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