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Elysia
I stared around the forest and said, "Guys, where are we?"
That apparently hadn't crossed anybodies mind and we all began to look around in wonder.
Suddenly, I clutched my head in pain.
"Elly?" Asked Kalinda. "Elysia, whats wrong?"
I couldn't answer, my vision was going blurry.
"Elly?" I felt my knees buckle and fall to the ground, but then, I lost all knowledge of my surroundings.
I was in a forest, next to a man on a horse. Two men flank him, also on horses. I can't move. I watch as a man emerges from the forest, a girl slung behind him. She has blond hair, a black dress and a blood red cape. The man flings her on the ground. Her bright green eyes slowly flutter open, then widen in fear as she sees the man who has dismounted and come to look into her eyes. "Hello my dear Chandra."
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"Elysia?! Elysia?!" My eyes slowly cracked open. My mouth was super dry, and I was super cold. I as laying on my back, unsure of how I got there.
"What....." I had a hard time keeping to one train of thought. "What happened?" I asked slowly.
"We dunno," said Dalena. "One second, you're asking where we are, and then next, you clutch your head and collapse. You've been out for a half hour."
"A half hour?" I asked, propping myself up on my elbows . But, the thing was so short. What was it? A vision? No, visions were story things.
"Yeah. You just kinda fell to the ground and got this blank look on your face."
"Weird."
"You're telling us!" Cried Kalinda. "So what happened?"
"Well....." I said slowly. I wasn't sure is I could tell them without sounding like I needed to go to an asylum or something. "I think...."
"You think?" prompted Ash.
"I think I had some kid of vision or something."
"What?" asked Kalinda.
"Well..." And I told them what I saw. I was surprised I could remember everything so clearly, I felt sure it was a dream. "I wish I had some Advil now though. I got a killer headache."
Kalinda laughed. "You just had some psychopathic vision, and all you can think is, 'I want advil'?"
We all laughed, then Dalena saud, "But who are those people. have you ever seen them before?"
"No..." I murmur. "I haven't. But I think that that girl Chandra might be in trouble!"
"If we don't know her, we can't exactly help her." pointed out Ash.
"True." I said. "So what do we do now? We're in the middle of some forest, when we should be sitting in Ash's room."
"I don't know..." said Kalinda. "I suppose the first thing, would be to figure out where in this forest we are, and then the fastest and safest way out. We don;t exactly know what's in here now do we?"
"Yeah." I said. "But how do we do tha-" but ten I clutched my head as me vision began to cloud again. "Oh crap." I whimpered.
"Chandra! They're all there! Just as Ciara predicted!" A girl with a voice like water said. The vision cleared to a evil looking study. A girl with long straight waist length hair sat behind a desk. She wore a black dress with a red cape. It was the same girl from her other vision, the one that was captured. Another girl, with a flame colored braid stood in front of the desk. She also had a black dress, but with blue cape.
"Our guardians?" The girl who was Chandra asked behind the desk. She looked very surprised.
"Yes! They're in the forest! Dai was searching for... well.. you know.. a sign of... him. You know.... Issac. And the trees told her that there were people in the forest, and that it was six girls! Who else could it be?!"
"Ask Ciara to go get them, she'll find them the most easily."
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- by twilightfroggysings |
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- | Submitted on 07/23/2010 |
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- Title: Sun and Moon (Excerpt #2)
- Artist: twilightfroggysings
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Here's another excerpt from my book "Sun and Moon" that I hope to have published someday.
I am starting to post in my journal the whole story if you wish to read it. - Date: 07/23/2010
- Tags: moon excerpt story written published
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Comments (4 Comments)
- twilightfroggysings - 08/11/2010
- No, it's just a second bit from a different perspective. This one is Elysia's, the other is Chandra's nightmare, and Eadrea's perspective.
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- sweet flower flora 109 - 08/11/2010
- so it's the sun and the moon part 2?
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- twilightfroggysings - 07/27/2010
- That's what I'm hoping for! smile
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- Mario the Davidic Hero - 07/26/2010
- not bad.... not bad at all... you should publish this one day wink
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