A girl alone

• Artist: InnEvil
• Description: It's a short preview of a story that I made up i'm not accually going to write the story if it's really bad so comment me what i should add and or lose.
• Date: 05/27/2010
• Tags: girl alone

A girl is born she grows she mourns for deaths she lives is dispair dismay and saddness. No ones there to comfort her in her saddness. She lives her life with no love carfulness or thought. She lives it as though she has no soul or life or even emotions. When deep down after crossing paths with a boy she never met her emotions stir. She slowly starts to feel an emotion she has no expiriance in..........love.

Comments

[Vivequinox]

First of all...
Fix your grammar.
Second...
No.

[Holy Misty13]

Its sad and flows great