Hatred of Hitler

• Artist: MaddyMay01
• Description:
• Date: 04/10/2010
• Tags: hatred hitler

On May 19th, 1927, a baby was born. Her parents chose to name her Marie. When Marie was five, Franklin Roosevelt wasd elected president. When Marie was fourteen, a war broke out. The morning of Marie's seveteenth birthday, she awoke to a shot and a terrified scream. Hitler was in her house, and he had shot her father. After a while, Hitler and his Nazis left, taking Marie with them. Within a day or two, Marie was in a concentration camp for girls.
I am Marie, and I'm going to tell you my story straight from the pages of my diary. I am going to start my story from the morning of my seventeenth birthday, which is also the time at which I was on my way to the concentration camp.

May 19th, 1943 The Shot
A shot just rang out in my house. My father is screaming and I'm afraid to get up. I'm going to get up anyway. I'm scared, but also curious.

Comments

[MaddyMay01]

Well, i do agree. it could be much more detailed. but i submitted this like a year ago like an hour after the rough draft. i need to do some editing.

[-GracedWithPoetry-]

I think it could be more...
What's the word...
Detailed.
Example: (?)
When Marie was seventeen, she heard her father's last scream after a bullet shot through his skin. The person behind the gun, Hitler, her worst enemy.