- i didnt know where i was....i felt something warm and strong pick me up. all i said was who.....are you? my voice sounded scratchy like i was sick. the stranger carried me to an old manor.....i didnt see much cause i passed out but when i woke up i found myself in a room. i was amazed by how the room had this strange beauty with a really pretty bed that i was in, the walls that had paintings of scenery. i didnt want to get up cause the pain in my back hurt so much. i sat there in the room for a few moments when i heard the sound of voices and footsteps. then i heard the sound of someone walking towards my room. i laid back in my bed and pretended that i was asleep. when the person came in he stood there as if he was observing me trying to tell if i was pretending to sleep i couldve sworn i heard him laugh, i tired to keep my eyes shut and trying not to look over at him when i heard his footsteps fade out of my room, i sat back up in my bed and just sat there for awhile. i felt kinda hungry cause i havent had lunch or dinner or anything in between. i heard footsteps again this time a bit slower. i heard something fall on the ground and wondered what it was. when the footsteps came closer to my room i decided to stay awake. when the stranger came into my room he was holding some soup water and a spoon on a tray. the guy seemed pretty cute to me. he seemed pretty young like maybe 16-18. he put the food on the nightstand beside my bed. after a minute or two he finally spoke he told me his name was shane. i told him my name was pricilla. he told me that he had to leave before he got in trouble. when he left i wondered where i was. all i knew was that i was far away from home....but what had made me come over to this place? i sat there eating my food, when i was done i felt a bit better so i decided to get up and snoop around a bit. i was still in my regular clothing so i didnt have to worry where my clothes were. i came to the door and turned the knob slowly, i was afraid i might make a loud noise. when i stepped outside of the room i felt a cold gush of air greet me. seems like my room mustve been pretty warm. the hallway seemed long and not knowing where i was going i headed to the left. when the hall came to a turn i noticed a room full of mirrors. feeling brave i decided to see what was in there, i looked in one of the mirrors shocked to see how horrible i looked. i was about to leave the room when i heard his voice. he said i found the room of mirrors. i only wondered how the hell did he find me?! he stepped into the room and walked to where i was. he told me to look in the mirror again when i did i was surprised at what i saw. i saw my face looking normal except for a mark the shape of a cresent moon and cat ears? then i looked at something that was moving behind my back a cats tail. i wondered why i didnt notice it before. shane told me that i am now a cat person! i was silent and i didnt not speak for five minutes. then i finally spoke. but im human! i squeaked nope not anymore! your now an official cat person! said shane whaaa! i dont want to be a cat person though........im still human right? i said sort of your half and half so its not as bad. shane said happily but look on the bright side your not the only cat person in the world! shane said reallythen who else is? i asked uh close your eyes and ill tell you when you can open them. said shane after a few seconds he told me i could open my eyes. when i opened them i was surprised at what i saw. shane had cat ears and a cat tail. i spoke softly almost in a whisper. so your a cat person too? i asked yup pretty cool isnt it? seems like your the only cat person ive met with that strange mark on your forehead. said shane yeah hey we should go explore seems like you havent been in this side of the manor before. i ran out of the room and almost fell on a rug. i came across a huge door it didnt seem like it had been opened in years. i decided i could open it if i tried, it took me a while but it finally opened. the room was dark and there were no windows, so no light came in the room except for the light outside of the room. i kept on feeling the walls for a light switch as i walked down the steps. strangley enough there were no light switches so i had to walk in the dark. my eyes got used to the dark and i could see a bit better i heard shane call my name, i repiled back to him and said i was in this room. he stared at the dark room that i was in. then he did the same thing as i did. i told him that there were no light switches in the room so we were in the dark for a while. the room seemed pretty messy i kept on tripping on things that i couldnt see. then shane almost scared me when he said boo! i smacked him on the arm and told him not to do that again. the room didnt seem all that important and it was probably a room used to store junk and what not. i explored the cornors looking for something unusal, as i looked i found a door. while shane wasent looking,i opened the door just a crack to see what was inside. all i saw was a very dark room that led to somewhere else. shane tripped and fell on something which made me turn around and stare at him. he gave me a sheepish look and picked up two candles. one was green the other was white. then he reached into his pocket looking for something, then he took his hand out to show me a lighter. he took the lighter and lit the candles. then i showed him the strange door. he looked at it and then opened it wide enogh to walk inside. we both walkked in feeling a sudden gush of air welcome us. then i felt something else i felt like i had so much energy in me. like i had 20 cups of coffe in me. i felt like running around in circles. and my eye sight had sharpened so i was able to see better in the dark shane mustve felt the samething, because he was grinning. we continued to walk feeling happy and great. then i stopped walking and looked around me wondering where this room or whatever led to. shane also stopped and whispered under his breath, so this must be the place. then i asked him what place? he told me that this room is a tunnel that leads to the town. then i asked what town? he responded quickly, saying i dont know ive never been there before. i started to walk again wanting to see the ending of this tunnel that made you feel energized. i walked fast hoping that shane would be able to catch up to me. i didnteven know if i was heading the right way, but i had this urge that pushed me forward. only turning around to see if shane had caught up to me, which luckily he did. i could only see the light was given off by shanes and my candle. i tripped and fell on someone and figured it was shane. i asked how he fell, and he told me that he tripped on his foot and when he tried to get up i fell on him. i got back up and waited for shane to get up aswell then we both continued walking this time we came across stairs. first i went up then shane.
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- Title: life
- Artist: cookiemnster12345
- Description: i felt like writing so i put this up hope ya enjoy :D im still not finished wit it though but ill try to finish it up plz comment nd rate :D
- Date: 04/04/2010
- Tags: life
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- cookiemnster12345 - 05/15/2010
- ok thanx for telling me ill try to improve it as much as i can. (:
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- jence16 - 05/15/2010
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it was ok, If you had added dialog to it it would've been awsome
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