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"You don't have to you just want to." I said. He turned away looking down into the darkened valley. "You never said a word about your feelings yet I knew, I loved you once but you were gone." he told me quietly. "Forget that Jack! It wasnt my fault! I told you I was taken away." He turned quickly and grabbed me by the shoulders and pulled me up to his face. " You were taken? Am I supposed to believe that? I thought you didn't care!" A single tear rolled down my cheek as I said, "I did care, but know I see the monster you are." I pushed him away and ran as he fell down the cliff.
to be continued.....
- Title: You Betrayed Me Part 1
- Artist: Timecraze
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Description:
this is about a real thing that happened to me turned to fiction enjoy!
- Date: 01/08/2010
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Timecraze - 01/10/2010
- ya i realized that... i was kicking myself lol
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- Scarlet_Hanson - 01/10/2010
- It's really good, a few grammar errors, but still interesting!
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- Timecraze - 01/09/2010
- not really he just got pushed away and realized so he fell...lol its complicated
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- ReportTeamOf2010 - 01/08/2010
- lol u pushed him off a cliff SIKO. jk
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