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Chapter 1
The Prank
"All you have to do is turn the switch to the left" said Sam. Sam,Jonathan,and Jessica were having a birthday party/sleepover for Sam. Jonathan had arrived early so they could pull the awesomest prank on Jessica. Jessica was walking down the street. "I see her,SHH" She stopped in front of Sam's house. She started walking up the lawn and then all of a sudden she was soaking wet! The sprinklers turned on and then confetti shot right over her head. "Really! How old are we here!" she said in a sarcastic tone. "Umm I turned 16 today so I guess that makes me 16!" Sam said. "Lets just go in"
Chapter 2
Presents
"I forgot my present at home, so I'll bring it by tomorrow." said Jessica. "That's fine" said Sam. Sam's mom brought out her present for Sam. "Unwrap it" she said. Sam tore that wrapping paper up like it was a serial killer! When all the wrapping paper was off it turned out to be a mirror. "I'm not a girl!" said Sam in a disgusted tone. "I know! It was my mom's great-grandmother's. I thought it should be yours." "I guess that's fine. So what was her name?" "Her name was Alice. You know there is a rumor about your great-great-great-grandmother." Well what is it?" They all said in unison. "Well rumor has it.....I don't want to scare you guys." "No, I won't get scared!" said Sam and Jessica. "I might. I'm not a big scary kind of guy" said Jonathan. "Well then I won't tell it" said Sam's mom. Then the kids went off to Sam's room.
- by MysticFuture |
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- | Submitted on 10/06/2009 |
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- Title: The Mirror
- Artist: MysticFuture
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Description:
3 friends get lost in a mysterious mirror which has a terrifying secret.......
I will write the next few chapters in a couple days! Hope you guys like it! - Date: 10/06/2009
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Esme the Goth of Horror - 10/12/2009
- Needs more perfection. But it's the story is Good! So put in more details like where are Jessicia's friends hiding? and more info about them. When you wrote "I see her!" who said that in the story? Plus it's a little bit confusing because theres no info about where r they (Jessicia's friends). So I love the way the story starts but ur story needs more info. Alright? So 5/5 because i can see bits of parts in the story that just needs more info and details that i know u can make up^^. RATE BACK!
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